November 23, 2008
-
nic nac with knives
i ask ?
is it
not
our soul's
ultimate task
to love
regardless
& extend
forgiveness
to
all those
which
build
road blocks
mess
with our
psyche
strangle
our hearts
or play
nic nac
with knives
upon
our backs
if each
lifetime spent
is
but a
detailed script
with
not chance
but exactly
the appropriate
& chosen
participants
seems
if we
stick to it
it is possible
& highly
probable
after many
round trips
from
the well
to the
hell hole
we may
eventually
get it
together
to star
in the role
of our
true
& divine selves
gmdO
Comments (4)
I’ve been playing with poem line breaks and wonder what you think of this reorganization of you “powerful” write. I like the words.
i ask, is it not our soul's ultimate task
to love regardless & extend
forgiveness to all those
which build road blocks
mess with our psyche
strangle our hearts
or play nic nac with knives
upon our backs?
if each lifetime spent
is but a detailed script
with not chance
but exactly the appropriate
& chosen participants
seems if we stick to it
it is possible & highly probable
after many round trips
from the well
to the hell hole
we may eventually get it together
to star in the role
of our true & divine self.
gmdO
PS - my dictionary show nicknack as a word. All this of course because I love what you wrote and don't expect you to change it. I just want you to know what it did to me. Bill
Since we have ever lasting life we may learn the lesson in time. Do you think that the people in our lives are scripted. Love you, Beck, Judi
Doing my Bible study and putting it to work in my life seem top priority to me too. Judi
@vexations: i like it ! hope all is well... i am back from the ethers ~~~
Comments are closed.