November 23, 2008

  • nic nac with knives

     

    i ask ?

     

    is it

    not

    our soul's

    ultimate task

    to love

    regardless

    & extend

    forgiveness

    to

    all those

    which

    build

    road blocks

    mess

    with our

    psyche

    strangle

    our hearts

    or play

    nic nac

    with knives

    upon

    our backs

    if each

    lifetime spent

    is

    but a

    detailed script

    with

    not chance

    but exactly

    the appropriate

    & chosen

    participants

    seems

    if we

    stick to it

    it is possible

    & highly

    probable

    after many

    round trips

    from

    the well

    to the

    hell hole

    we may

    eventually

    get it

    together

    to star

    in the role

    of our

    true

    & divine selves

     

    gmdO

     

     

Comments (4)

  • I’ve been playing with poem line breaks and wonder what you think of this reorganization of you “powerful” write.  I like the words.

    i ask, is it not our soul's ultimate task

    to love regardless & extend

    forgiveness to all those

    which build road blocks

    mess with our psyche

    strangle our hearts

    or play nic nac with knives

    upon our backs?

    if each lifetime spent

    is but a detailed script

    with not chance

    but exactly the appropriate

    & chosen participants

    seems if we stick to it
    it is possible & highly probable

    after many round trips

    from the well

    to the hell hole

    we may eventually get it together

    to star in the role

    of our true & divine self.

     gmdO

    PS - my dictionary show nicknack as a word.  All this of course because I love what you wrote and don't expect you to change it.  I just want you to know what it did to me.  Bill

  • Since we have ever lasting life we may learn the lesson in time. Do you think that the people in our lives are scripted. Love you, Beck, Judi

  • Doing my Bible study and putting it to work in my life seem top priority to me too. Judi

  • @vexations: i like it ! hope all is well... i am back from the ethers ~~~

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